Archive for August, 2008
Selling A Story? Talk To Me
Tuesday, August 26th, 2008I value my online presence at £115,000
Wednesday, August 20th, 2008
Where’s Your Purple Cow?
Tuesday, August 19th, 2008

Survey Power
Wednesday, August 13th, 2008Press Release Surgery August
Monday, August 11th, 2008For this month’s press release surgery I want to talk about intros. The intro (first paragraph) is by far the most important part of a press release. It should be 30 words max and should summarise the whole story. Never begin a press release with “Research shows that…” it is guaranteed to turn readers off. The following is a genuine press release - my comments and suggestions are in red…
Research shows that more and more Brits are choosing to holiday in the UK to beat the big squeeze, with many shunning expensive package holidays and heading to our coastlines in search of something that’s gentle on the purse strings and to account for our traditionally changeable climate - a good all weather option.
Yuk – 53 word, one sentence intro which begins with the dreaded “research shows” far too long and boring!
According to research conducted by lastminute.com this month, bookings for domestic breaks are up 16% year on year, and Cornwall is the destination of choice for many holidaymakers. Reasons for the surge in Great British getaways are down to the current economic situation and the drop in strength of the pound against the Euro.
Interesting info – could be told better and snappier. I’d write something like…
Millions of cash-strapped Brits are turning their backs on the Costa Del Sol and heading for Cornwall in their droves.
So, when you’ve been priced out by your usually perfect package holiday to Spanish shores, and you still want a little luxury but on a beans on toast budget, what do you do? You get yourself booked up for a weeks glamping.
But the hard up holiday makers are refusing to rough it and instead are turning to glamping – that’s glamorous camping to the uninitiated.
Nestled in the stunning Cornish landscape and inspired by the nearby Eden Project, this is a perfectly idyllic holiday hideaway. Breathtaking views, quality time with near and dear at one with nature and all it’s pleasures, Mayrose Farm has created the perfect balance with this glorious yet green, and impressively, glamorous get away.
Existing in its own controlled climate, the Glamppod is housed in a weather proof tunnel. With roll down sides to secure against the occasional down pour, they can hopefully more often be rolled up to enjoy the sunshine, but being protected from the elements means that glamping can now be enjoyed all year round.
The 17 acre estate is also home to animals including the sheep - happy to be fed and fussed over by children, plus chickens who provide the most gorgeous eggs for breakfast. It all contributes to the feeling of freedom and serenity experienced by guests who visit and fall in love with this peaceful and special retreat.
For a truly magically break, this could be the answer. Perfectly secluded and serene, glamping is the ultimate holiday experience for families and friends alike; enjoy the peace and seclusion; pure happiness set in the pretty Cornish countrywide.
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Bagnificent hit the Daily Record
Thursday, August 7th, 2008However, a chance discovery on the internet uncovered the possibilities of buying discounted designer bags from Italy. From that moment, the 41-year-old’s future was sealed.
“Every time I saw them, they would have a different bag, so I asked them what they did with the old ones.
“But I thoroughly enjoy it and wouldn’t want to go back to accountancy or an office for anything.”
To find out more about Bagnificent, visit www.bagnificent.co.uk
Guardian Trade in Second Hand Books Revealed
Tuesday, August 5th, 2008Big Brother TV producer turned author Shed Simove tried to purchase a copy of his own bestseller Ideas Man as a gift for the show’s presenter Davina McCall.
Mr Simove’s inspirational book, detailing his adventures as a TV industry insider and entrepreneur, had sold out from bookstores and online in just three months, causing him to turn instead to the enterprising folks on Amazon Marketplace where he was pleased to find a “brand new” copy in mint and unread condition.
Shed duly handed over his dosh and a few days later a package arrived with his book packed carefully inside.
But when Shed opened the front cover to pen Davina a dedication, he was surprised to see the book had already been dedicated by himself.
Shed said: “I always sign and stamp books before I hand them to friends or send out promotional copies. This particular book had been signed by me, dedicated to a journalist at the Guardian who had requested a copy and then stamped with my own personal seal I created just for this purpose.
“I could hardly believe it when I saw it. The book clearly hadn’t been read, so it’s no wonder it didn’t earn a review in the newspaper’s books section.
“The annoying thing is I still don’t have a book to give to Davina. I clearly can’t give her one that’s been dedicated to someone else. It looks like I will have to wait for the reprint.”
The journalist, from the Guardian’s feature desk, said: “I did receive the book but some promotional books are sold on to raise money for charity when we are finished with them.”






